They are lots of gabs, with the ground areas at some points they are mistakes when the rock ground meet the beach. I personally don't like how the buildings are set on the ground, its not realistic where how they lay and how they are placed (the only good one placed is the fortress) + the palms are repetitive, you should of used different palms, not one and paste it multiple times. You also have shadow mistakes, its one source of light from one direction but multiple shadows (the two green towers are showing shadows to the left, the fortress's shadows are to the right), and the Bahrain flag is wrong too, it should have more red spikes and they should be sharper.
Over all its a nice idea and composition but not a good execution, you should take your time and watch details to have it as a great piece.
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good job
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Over all its a nice idea and composition but not a good execution, you should take your time and watch details to have it as a great piece.
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